So, I finished the second draft of the novel this week, it felt really good to get to the end and still see a cohesive story. I plan on going through for a quick gramma and spelling check, continuity of fantasy name spelling etc, and then I will be giving it over to some beta readers. I feel it needs a bit more in places, more character growth/insight, more development in the action scenes, maybe some more world building/background, but, I want to see what the Betas think of it before I start adding again.
Anyway in the mean time I dabbled with a blurb. Here’s the third draft of it, see what you think.
When her family are murdered at the hands of the nefarious Black Feathers Mercenary company, Mia finds herself hunted across the Northern kingdoms of Coridan. The young woman must summon all her strength, learn to trust her strange new companion, Hoq, the goblin, and evade the Black Feathers relentlessly pursuing them. Aided by thieves, gnomes, assassins and the self proclaimed thief-mage, Tavos, they must confront the past to save their future, one in which Mia is changed forever.